Not really a beach this time, just volcanic rocks that form natural pools. I tried to work in the feedback I got on the last post and took a lot of time with trying out compositions on this one. Still didn't figure out the topic of a good subject though
Like this?Thanks for the elaborate feedback, it is highly appreciated. You’re definitely right about the lines getting more appeal if they went directly from one corner to the other. I’m not sure whether I understand your comment about the subject lining up everything yet. I’d totally get it if the lines were leading somewhere, but struggle to lead anywhere with them being all parallel… I’ll ponder it some more and will try different approaches to the topic of a subject when I’m out taking photos the next time, thank you so much!
I like the clear separation of fields the image allows, with the water, wet stones, dry stones, orange vulcanic sand and finally the green fields.
The center piece of the image is made up by my wife in a cyan colored shirt sitting on a white towel. However to get the shot of the color lines right I had to go up quite a bit, which makes her so tiny in the image that she does not really have any influence on the watcher anymore...
I took your comment and Obi’s, and combined them in the editing d version below Obi’s comment.
Thanks so much for the constructive feedback and the praise!